"Cassie!" said my aunt. After the tragedy, I had to go to my aunt's. We were at her restaurant. My aunt was making strawberry custard, my favorite. But the custard tasted like sour grapefruit!
"Aunt Hellen!" I cried, "What were the ingredients for th..", I stopped, "Aunt Hellen, are you okay?"
Tears streaming down my eyes, I went to call the doctor. No answer!
I went to call my friends, Jessica, Jane, Stephanie and Cookie, their dog. We lifted my aunt onto the bed with wheels. We hurried even though it was 11 to the small hospital-blocks away. I wondered what had happened.
Well done, this is an interesting way to use the prompt. I enjoyed the storyline just read it through to make sure it makes sense. Keep writing and planning your 100WC, I look forward to reading more of your extracts. Lisa Team100WC London
ReplyDeleteThank you!!! I have submitted another one already
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DeleteAnanya, i agree this is a good post but what was the tragedy that happend to you before you went to your aunt's restaurant?
ReplyDeleteI THINK IT IS TOO BUT I COULDN'T DO MORE SINCE IT SHOULD ONLY BE 100 WORDS
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